Wow, that house sounds amazing, Shreya! Next time, try to include some more adjectives (describing words), adverbs (words describing actions) and similes (sentences that use 'like' or 'as') - all of these features help to give the reader a better description in their minds.
Wow, that house sounds amazing, Shreya! Next time, try to include some more adjectives (describing words), adverbs (words describing actions) and similes (sentences that use 'like' or 'as') - all of these features help to give the reader a better description in their minds.
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