Sunday, July 21, 2019

Speech feedback


Shreya
Why it would be cool if we could communicate with animals.
  • Liked your idea of a personal spy. 
  • Unique topic.
  • Included humour (loved your reference to Mr Mc losing stuff all the time).
  • Clever thinking about translating an animal language into human language. This really got me thinking of the benefits. 
I need to…
Talk more slowly
Next time

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