Jump Jam

Usually, we would go out for fitness but today was a little bit different… and if you continue on to read you'll find out! I was super excited !!

And…….yes he’s coming come on as soon as Brett fairweather (BRETT FAIRWEATHER) came out the school office,there was a tumultuous gasp! EEEE… I said in my head but he looked so different like very different. If you don't know who Brett is( which you should) he’s like the champ of Jump jam...We sang roughly about 4 songs. While we were doing the dances the wind was whistling quite hard but it was still sunny I despise this weather, but I forgot about it while I was 

Dancing.

We danced and sang to hmmm let me think oh ya this was I think the second one it was WHO LET THE FREAKS OUT!! While we were killing it I said to myself ‘I was wondering if we were going to do the coconut dance and guess what straight after we did the coconut song. yeh convenient but the teachers did it on stage too!! Then we did a despicable me song from the minions(bananana). Oh yeah, we did a YMCA thing with Brett and the jump jam monitors, but a year 3 came up as well. I also forgot one song but never mind. Anyways today was a fun day but didn't get Bretts signature,

But that's okay hopefully we do this again next year.

I Advika have your writing. I liked how you used high-level punctuation. In order to improve you should use speech marks.