scooting in school should be banned

Scooter’s should be banned from schools!

Hi, today i'm persuading you to agree with me that scooters should be banned from school.

Scooters should be banned from school because people could easily trip over a crack in the ground like this one right here

                   .you could topel over and seriously hurt your self.

With scooters you can easily bump into little kids with can lead to serious injuries.
When you scooting  your scooter wheels could be muddy so the school's
concrete will have marks on them.Someone good easily slip because of
the mud!

Thanks for reading my persuasive writing hope you were  persuaded!

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